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Post by Guest Fri Apr 03, 2009 3:49 am

sanguisfiat wrote:That fire threatening to consume her very soul, making it cringe backwards inside her like a whipped horse, escape, her beast climbing the walls to get away, away away away. The beast always so strong and dependable, whimpering and crying out for help, for someone to save it, to get it away from those all consuming flickering tongues of fiery death. The sight of that poor Kindred, the bright flash as his hair was consumed first, the sounds of popping spitting flesh like a pig on a spit following next. His screams... Oh the screams, like his beast was climbing out of his throat abandoning his carrier for greener pastures. The screams stopped soon, when his blood and brain began to boil from the heat. Most of his skin was gone then, revealing the grisly smile of death that all skulls have, reassuring those left behind that the place they are going is pleasant. The heat only got more intense, tightening tendon and muscle and making his body do a hideous jerky jig, and then it was too much, snapping and popping as once virile tendon gave way. She closed her eyes then, the heat vaporizing the marrow of his bones, tiny explosions as every one of 200 bones on his body popped to release the pressure of the judgement. His skull the last, one thunderous boom, sending skittering pieces of macabre shrapnel across the floor. Bits of ash raining down on those close enough, dessicated bits of body....That lingering smell of death that one hopes to never become familiar with... And slowly, like all fires that burn hot...It is gone... Faster than one could thing. A piteous pile of sludge on the floor all that remains of that breathing spark in the dark fabric of the universe.


Well Just loved the description, and the adition of the art was just sooo goood, I figured it deserved and special mention, so for you all...

I loved it XD

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Post by Guest Fri Apr 03, 2009 12:09 pm

Aww you make me blush like every day !

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Post by Premsyl Fri Apr 03, 2009 1:19 pm

Yeah, I really dug this too. Very evocative imagery.
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Post by tsameti Fri Apr 03, 2009 2:24 pm

man... that is intense. and that is why napalm is a war crime.
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Post by Guest Fri Apr 03, 2009 4:29 pm

Is it? It makes sense... But I didnt know that specific items could be a war crime.

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Post by Guest Fri Apr 03, 2009 4:32 pm

it is only if you get caught...but then again so is every thing else

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Post by Guest Fri Apr 03, 2009 4:35 pm

Indeed hehehe

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Post by Guest Fri Apr 03, 2009 4:44 pm

In horse shows we say.

If the judge didnt see it? It didnt happen.

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Post by Guest Fri Apr 03, 2009 5:09 pm

LOL yup, that's the spirit xD

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Post by Guest Fri Apr 03, 2009 5:18 pm

Did this happen at the Court where Marius burned? How did I completely miss it?

Very nice!!! Smile

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Post by Guest Fri Apr 03, 2009 5:21 pm

Well it was on the Requiem mood so, yey!

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Post by Forn Clakes Fri Apr 03, 2009 5:22 pm

It was pure haunting and made my heart sink at how Eva must have felt.

Just the response I look for in any piece of awesome literature.

~FC.
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Post by Guest Fri Apr 03, 2009 5:25 pm

Exactly my point XD

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Post by Guest Fri Apr 03, 2009 5:51 pm

Thanks guys! *god I cant stop blushing today!*

C: It was her description of what she saw when Gabriel Marcus burned.

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Post by Guest Fri Apr 03, 2009 5:56 pm

Yey for blushing girls!

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